Writers are always working to tighten their lines and constantly practice how to say more in fewer words.
Here is a prime example.
“For Sale: Baby shoes, never worn.” – Earnest Hemingway
Poignant isn’t it?
I wondered how I could do the same here.
Let me know what you think.
“Jesus saves; even you.”
Prayer – Father, forgive us for long paragraphs when the truth is; Jesus saves, even me. Amen
"I believe Jesus is the answer to every question." Brenda Wood is a motivational speaker, writer and author of Heartfelt, 366 Devotions for Common Sense Living. She is also a recovered bulimic who has gained and lost several 1000 pounds over the years! She understands the pain of overweight and the agony of life with an eating disorder. Brenda is known for her common sense wisdom, sense of humor and quirky comments.
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